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Post by Sunshine93 on Aug 31, 2008 18:56:08 GMT -5
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Post by michelle on Aug 31, 2008 19:08:58 GMT -5
i understand completely. i've been gone pretty much all day and i've been wanting to work on the one shot idea i had but i know there's cleaning that NEEDS to be done....grr...i hate having to be an adult sometimes. lol
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Post by Sunshine93 on Aug 31, 2008 19:17:47 GMT -5
i understand completely. i've been gone pretty much all day and i've been wanting to work on the one shot idea i had but i know there's cleaning that NEEDS to be done....grr...i hate having to be an adult sometimes. lol aww! *hug* isnt funny how you seem to be more busy on weekends the weekdays? LOL |
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Post by michelle on Aug 31, 2008 19:20:43 GMT -5
oh my gosh yes! lol especially Sundays....those are my busiest days...it's always church and then hanging with family/friends and cleaning and all my errands i need to get done for the week. drives me crazy some times. lol
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Post by Anna on Aug 31, 2008 22:01:24 GMT -5
awesome update kris  hmm...conner and mandy. so, he thought it was so bad that his sister was going out with kevin, because he is 2(?) years older, but then heres a possible future relationship with him and a girl whos 2 years younger? and he seems to think thats a great idea! typical  |
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Post by Nanna{darkblue} on Sept 3, 2008 18:36:24 GMT -5
I AM IN LOVE WITH THIS STORY!!!!!! I think i love you!! lol jk but if you keep writing like this, I might just start!! lol jk
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Post by Sunshine93 on Sept 4, 2008 12:36:14 GMT -5
I AM IN LOVE WITH THIS STORY!!!!!! I think i love you!! lol jk but if you keep writing like this, I might just start!! lol jk
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Post by Sunshine93 on Sept 4, 2008 13:49:56 GMT -5
CHAPTER THIRTY-FOUR: The Party, Part 1.
September 17th, 2004, Friday
The minute Friday rolled along, Conner was more than happy to help his parents finish packing. He ran through the house basically singing and dancing. Brynn rolled her eyes are he crashed into all of the luggage at the bottom of the stairs. He quickly stood up and beamed when his parents told him it was time for them to go. He raced to the door and grabbed all his mother’s stuff. She laughed. “Honey I can take some of that!”
He scoffed. “Nonononon...you’re expecting, mother. And I don’t want you to be late!!”
Brynn giggled as her mom rolled her eyes as the walked outside.
The Jonas’ met up with the Aston’s in the Aston’s front yawn. Jack and Paul loaded up everyone’s luggage in Brynn’s parents car, the moms look at their children and said goodbye. Brynn and Conner hugged their mother, then went to Denise as the Jonas boys all hugged Mrs.Amy. When everyone was done, Mrs.Denise looked at her boys and sighed. “I’m sorry about tonight, boys.”
Kevin waved her off and Joe mumbled something. Mrs.Denise smiled and kissed all of them again. She then looked at Nick. “I’m leaving YOU in charge.”
Nick smiled. “Yes m’am!”
His mother smiled back. She then went and hugged Kevin. She pulled away from him a bit. “You DO understand why you and Joe can’t go tonight, right sweetie?”
Kevin nodded. He knew what kind of party it was going to be. He wanted to go so badly..but he wasn’t going against his parents wishes. “Yes m’am.”
She smiled again and kissed him on the cheek. After all the last minute goodbyes, the parents all got into the Aston’s car, and drove off. Conner looked so happy Brynn thought he was going to start singing. She was close, though. The moment their car was out of sight, Conner began dancing and running around the front lawn. Frankie began giggling and dancing along. Kevin came up behind Brynn, wrapped his arms around her, and began rocking back and forth. After a while, Conner finally stopped. He went over to Brynn, Joe, and Kevin.
“So boys,” Conner started, “We have a few hours til the party.” He glanced back at Nick and Frankie, who were playing with one of Frankie’s action figures he brought over. Conner glanced back at the two oldest Jonas boys. “We could defiantly get a babysitter in time.”
Brynn awkwardly turned her head behind her and looked up to see Kevin’s reaction. She saw he was tempted, his eye couldn’t tell a lie, and Joe seemed all up for the idea. Brynn held her breath. She wanted more than anything for them to go, but she would never want them to get in trouble. After a moment, they both sighed. Joe shook his head and Kevin gave a small smile. “Thanks, Conner. But it’s okay.”
“Yeah.” Joe agreed.
Conner nodded. “Okay, dudes.”
They all talked for a while, until Conner excused himself to go inside and take a shower, and Joe took Nick and Frankie back home because they were complaining about being hungry. Brynn and Kevin were left in the yard. Brynn turned around in Kevin’s arms and wrapped her arms around his neck. He leaned down and kissed her. “I thought they’d never leave.”
Brynn giggled. Kevin then smiled and gently pushed her away. “Now go get ready for that party.”
“But-..”
“Nope. Now go and have an amazing time. I love you.” He kissed her and before she could reply, he was gone. She smiled, rolled her eyes and then went inside to get ready.
Two hours later, it was 8 o clock and Conner and Brynn were standing in front of Jackson River’s house that was about five minutes down the road. No..this wasn’t a house. This was a mansion. Brynn gulped. “Woah.”
Conner nodded. “I know.” Conner was wearing jeans and t-shirt that said something Brynn could care less about. Brynn looked at herself. She had straightened her hair, put make up, eyeliner, and some jewelry on. She was also wearing a jean min-skirt with an emerald green form-fitting three-quarter length shirt. She looked gorgeous, Conner told she when she came down the stairs.
Brynn raised her eyebrow and looked at the River’s huge driveway. She looked back at Conner. “There’s only one other car here. Are we early?”
Conner laughed. “ I guess just a tad.” He rung the doorbell again and a moment later Jackson answered. Brynn looked at him. She had seen him a few times, but never really hung out with him. He was 17, captain of the football team, tall, tan, gorgeous, and had the best hair of any guy, every girl told Brynn when she asked about him. She smiled a bit, he was pretty cute, I guess.
He smiled back and ushered Conner and her into his mansion. He and Conner did the whole “man hand shake”, then Jackson looked at Brynn and raised his eyebrows.
“Oh my god girl, your effing gorgeous tonight.” He smiled as Brynn blushed.
Conner laughed. “She already has a boyfriend, Jackson. Kevin would kill me if I let her fall for you.”
Brynn laughed. Jackson was cute and all, but he wasn’t like Kevin. Jackson waved their comments off. “So where’s this Kev guy?”
“He..” Conner began but Brynn cut him off. “He couldn’t make it.”
Jackson nodded. “Ah..lucky for me, then.” He put his arm around Brynn’s shoulders and began leading her down the hallway. “Let me show you to the party, baby.”
Brynn giggled, but then looked over her shoulder and gave Conner a “if you don’t come here NOW ima kill you” look. Conner quickly got the message. Within seconds he was a step behind them.
A few minutes later, they were down in Jackson’s basement. Well, it wasn’t really a basement. It was more like a tircked- out party room. Jackson told them to sit on the couch. He turned on some music and went to the bar.
“Want anything?” He asked, already grabbing himself a beer. Brynn raised her eyebrows. “Hey Jackson?”
“Yuuup?” he asked, trying to find the perfect music.
“There will be..other people here right?”
He began laughing. “Oh girl. Just wait and see.” he walked over to them and gave Conner a can of beer, then Brynn. She took it, and was about to put in on the table when she heard Conner open his.
“Conner!!” She hissed. He looked at her. “I promise, B. Only one. I swear.”
Brynn glared at him and pushed her beer as far away as possible. Her brother began drinking. Brynn had an uneasy feeling, but she didn’t say anything. About ten minutes later, a few more people started coming, and the party began hopping and it was amazing. Soon at least 100 people were there, and Brynn was having a ball. And then the football team show up with about a million kegs of alcohol, and then it all went from bad, to worse.
more soon! im writing the chapter now!
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Post by bloodtypeespresso on Sept 4, 2008 17:15:29 GMT -5
 Yeah, that's not gonna be good... LOL, but the chapter was good. And that Conner guy's already bugging me!  but anyway, more soon please!
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hehe
lol
Yeah, that's not gonna be good...
