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Post by neverletyoufall on Jan 22, 2008 15:38:30 GMT -5
I really want to post it up but will you read it? it is completely fictional and about me and Nick being best friends ever since we were on broadway together.
Should i post it?
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Post by Vanessa (: on Jan 23, 2008 1:21:59 GMT -5
Post it! It seems like a great idea. (:
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Post by audreykins on Jan 24, 2008 20:23:51 GMT -5
Absolutely! I'm willing to read any JoBro fic.
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Post by neverletyoufall on Jan 25, 2008 6:00:08 GMT -5
Ok Well the first bit is boring but anyway.
Chapter 1 - Goodnight and Goodbye Kirstens POV
it is New years eve 2000 soon to be 2001. i was in America and the 1st of january was my 9th birthday. I had just finished my two year contract with Les Miserables and it was time for me to head back to England. I had been working with Nick Jonas but i had known him since we were both babys becuase we both auditioned for an advert.
It was 11:58 and i thought that this was a good time to tell Nick that i was leaving, because i was leaving right after the countdown.
" Nick i need to tell you something" I said. " Ok What?" he asked. " um. well. . Goodnight and Goodbye." i quickly blurted out. Why did i say that! " Huh? What does that mean" Nick said. Then the coutdown started. " Nick, I um. . " I stuttured. The crowd Shouted, " 5, 4, 3, 2, 1. HAPPY NEW YEAR!" " Happy birthday Kirsten oh and Happy New Year" Nick said as he pulled me in for a hug. Nick was my best friend. I coldnt tell him i was leaving. So I grabbed Nick by the sholders and quickly kissed him on the lips. I was crying . "Wow! Kirsten I. . Why are you crying?." Nick Asked. " I have to go Nick. I Will Call You From England." I said.
I just stood their and left Nick, and my Mum and I Left for the airport.
Comments please ? this is my first fanfic! ;D
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Post by audreykins on Jan 26, 2008 22:59:46 GMT -5
Oh! I really love the idea! Keep going.
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Post by neverletyoufall on Jan 27, 2008 6:33:29 GMT -5
Seeing as you like it, i will post chapter 2 and 3. It is Very Long.
Chapter 2 - The Number 6
Were back to December 24th 2007.
Kirstens POV.
My Birthday is soon. I remember telling Nick a week ago that i would turn up at his door 6 days before my birthday. 6 is our lucky number. 6 is the number of times Nick used to hug me in an hour. 6 is the number of times we used to practise our lines a day. 6 is the number of cupcakes we used to share a day. And 6 is the number of times i told my Mum i loved him.
I have already bought my ticket. But i am nervous. lets see if Nick is on IM.
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Nicks POV.
2 more days till Kirsten comes. I don't know if she will. She looks different but i really wanna see her. 2 more days. i cantn wait. She said 6 days before her birthday. It has been 6 years since i have seen her. 6 is our lucky number.
6 is the number of times I used to hug me in an hour. 6 is the number of times we used to practise our lines a day. 6 is the number of cupcakes we used to share a day. And 6 is the number of times i told my Mum i loved her.
I wonder if she is on IM.
She Is On! What do i say to her?
- I click on her name -
NickJ IsOffTheChain- Hey Kirsten. hows it going? BroadwayKid- Nick! Im good Just chillin'. You? NickJ IsOffTheChain- Im great. Are you really coming? I mean am excited. It has been 6 years. BroadayKid- Of course im coming Nick! I have my ticket ad everything. My parents are flying up on the 5th. I can't wait. NickJ Is OffTheChain- Neither Can I. I miss you so much. BroadwayKid- Me too. Hows everyone over their? NickJ IsOffTheChain- They're all great.They can't wait till 26th. I have your present, well Christmas and Birthday lol. Oh and Joe says Hi. Oh and Frankie Said he loves you. lol BroadwayKid- I have yours well i have everyone's. Tell Joe i said Hey and tell Frankie I Love Him Too. NickJ IsOffTheChain- Kirsten. Why didn't you tell me you were leaving 6 years ago.
BroadwayKid- uhh got2go sorry. Love you Nick. Say Hi To everyone. Can't wait till the 26th. xxx
She logged off.
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Kirstens POV
I didn't know what to say Oh I didnt want to tell why i didn't tell him. But i don't want to tell him the reason because the reason is that i Love Him. . GRRR I mean lovED him. Grrr.
Do i love him?
Chapter 3 - 24 hours from you.
Kirstens POV
As I got of the plane my phone went off. It was Nick.
1 New Message. Nick J. 1:50pm.
Hey have you arrived. are you safe. need a lift?. Wait are you even here! Message back.
Nick xx
Nick has always been a worrier.
As my driver picked me up, i thought of what I was going to say.
" Aren't you Kacey from Skins?" my driver asked
AUTHORS NOTE - Skins is a teen drama that is big in England.
" uh yes I am. I didn't know its out in America." I said " It has just come out over here. I watch it all the time. Although its a little rude." the driver laughed. I laughed. What he meant by rude is sex. The programme probaly is based on Sex lol.
Their it was the Jonas house. I was hesitating to step outside of the car.
What do I Say?
Nicks POV
I am making out with Miley on the couch. She is practically on top off me. She is irritating though. When is Kirsten getting here. I can't here anything Miley keeps making moaning noies.
Kirstens POV
I knock on the door. I am sweating. Oh gross.
The door's opening. It's Joe, i smile widely. he Gasps in shock.
" KIRSTEN!" Joe Shouts. " Joe!" i scream as he grabs me in for a hug. We hold on tight. He spins me round. " Wow Joe you have changed! Looking sharp!" I said. " Your Looking. WOW!" Joe gasped. " It's so good to be back!" I say.
" Kirsten! Wow You have Changed" Denise said. "Denise! You look great!" I say and i pull her in for a hug. " Well My husband is out shopping with Frankie and Kevin, and Nick is in the living room. Nick is going to be so excited your here. Go through Hunny." Denise smiles.
I walk through the lounge door to see Nick with some girl on top off him. I gasp " Oh Crap" I say and My jaw drops. " Kirsten!" Nick looks at me then back at the girl. He pushes the girl off the couch and runs and jumps on me. I fall over. Joe helps me up. " Nick! It is so great to see you!" I Hug him tight. " NickyPoo, you pushed me off!" the girl said, she has a very annoying voice. She has dark brown long hair and weired teeth. She looks familiar. Nick is too busy staring at me to notice the girl. " Oh Miley. Sorry" he runs over and helps her up " Oh your Miley Cyrus. Hi." I smile at her. She gives me a dirty look. " Um Kirsten this is my. .um. .friend. . who happens to be a girl" Nick stammered. " Im his Intimate Girlfriend" Miley sneers. She grabs Nick and kisses him infront of me. " Girlfriend?" I say i was dissapointed.
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Post by chandy on Jan 27, 2008 11:02:29 GMT -5
oooh, Miley, you better BACK OFF!
I love it so far! Post more soon!!!
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Post by Vanessa (: on Jan 27, 2008 15:31:25 GMT -5
I like it. Post more soon. (:
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Post by audreykins on Jan 28, 2008 0:04:00 GMT -5
I love it so far! I love that you give us both of their povs. Can't wait for more!
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Post by neverletyoufall on Jan 28, 2008 12:37:20 GMT -5
Chapter 4 - Camp Rock or Camp Shock?
Joes POV
"Let me show you to your room" I gestured. " Your sharing Nicks room. You could have the guest room but my Mom thought it would be best if you were together" I Said quietly.
She is so pretty, she has changed. Man i feel bad for her, i know she likes Nick and their he is going down on Miley.
" So Kirsten. I saw the advert for Skins. Looks pretty good.!" I said trying to take her mind off Nick. " Yea well it was fun filming it. But i suggest you don't watch it but if you decide to DON'T watch it with Frankie." she replied laughing. " Why not? Becuase of all the SEX!" i screamed. She laughed then i laughed, then she laughed and then I blushed. " Yes Joe becuase of the . .S-E-X" Kirsten spelt it out for me.
Right then her cell rang, her ringtone was Inseperable.
Kirsten- Hello? Camp Rock Producer- Am I Speaking To Miss Kirsten Jacobs? Kirsten- yes you are. Whom may I be speaking to?
*I Love her English manners.
Camp Rock Producer- I am Kevin Lafferty the Producer of Camp Rock. Kirsten- Ok. Well what can i do for you Mr Lafferty? Camp Rock Producer- Please Call me Kevin. We heard that you are staying with the Jonas Brothers in America and we wondered if you would like a part in Camp Rock? Kirsten- Yea The boys are my best friends!A Part? Really? Well who would i be playing.? Camp Rock Producer- Well your characters name would be Haylie Jones. And you will be playing the Boys best friends, so that should be easy. We know you can dance and sing so that makes you perfect for the part! Kirsten- Well i would love to participate. Thank you Mr Lafferty, I mean Kevin! Camp Rock Producer- Thank You Kirsten. Bye.
" AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH" Kirsten Screamed. " Whats the matter?" i asked. " I have a part in Camp Rock, and i will be playing Nick, Kevin and Your Best Friend!" she shouted. " Really? This is going to be soo cool!" i said happily as i pulled her in for a hug, but just then Kevin walked in, so she pulled away and ran to him, he always ruins things. " KEVIN!" she screamed and hugged him. " Kirsten i have missed you so much. And im guessing you saw Nick with his skank of a girlfriend Miley. We hate her. But he just won't break up with her. I think he is scared." said kevin. " Dinner is Ready Kids!" My Mom shouted. We all ran downstairs to the dinner table. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Chapter 5 - When Your Gone Nicks POV.
" Ok Miley I will call you later and before you go to bed. I have to go and so do you. I need to go catch up with Kirsten" I said " Kristen? Or whatever her name is. You would rather be with her then me! NickyPoo! You better call me. After dinner before i go to bed and at 6 in the morning tomorrow!" Miley demanded " Her name is Kirsten and i havent seen her in 6 years Miles. 6 in the morning, i don't even wake up at 9.!" i whined. " So i dont care! You better call me!. Love ya Nicky!" she yelled then she kissed me.
grr i can't stand her. Just then i saw Kirsten smiling at me, so i ran to the kitchen. " Hey, sorry about that she can be a little. . demanding" i explained. " A Little?" Keving questioned. "Demanded? She's a total NIGHTMARE!" Joe shouted.
" KIRSTEN!" Frankie yelled and jumped on her. " Frankie my man. How are you?" She asked him. "Im good. Woah your hotter in person! I don't really remember you because i was about two when you were last here." Frankie said to her. She laughed. She looks so cute when she laughs. " Frankie stop hitting on Kirsten and help us lay the table!" Kevin said . " I'll help." Kirsten offered. " No no. Your a guest you sit down" I said and i grabbed her by the hand and sat her in her chair. " Kirsten is that you?" My dad called. " Paul! How nice to see you." She gave him a big bear hug. "It's so good to have you back. Just like old times. You have always been apart of the family." My dad said. " Ok lets eat!" Joe called.
We said grace and started to eat. " Kirsten your parents said that they are flying up on the 5th so Paul and I Are leaving tomorrow to book a hotel because they are landing in New York. And it is quite a long drive from New Jersey. So we will stay in New York for 10 days. Will you be Ok with the boys?" My Mom asked her. " Sure it will just be like old times" Kirsten agreed and smiled.
After we finished dinner. She came into my room to get some stuff. Now was the time to ask her why she didnt tell me.
" Kirsten. Why didn't you tell me you were leaving 6 years ago? Whenever i ask you, you just say you have to go or doge the question." I yelled. " Nick, it's hard to explain. You were my best friend Nick and i had to leave i had no choice. I could't tell you." She said. " So you just left me standing there clueless. I searched 2 hours for you until i found out that you left!" I screamed. " Nick why are you making a big deal over it. I only left! We were i mean are best friends yea i know but i didn't know that it meant that much to you!" She explained. "Well you now know how much it means to me. It's just. I don't want you to leave cause you know, your my best friend and i Love you." I said slowly She smiled but i could see tears in her eyes so i hugged her. Man she smells good. What am i a STALKER! But I love her. As a friend. Or More . Maybe. I dunno. I have to call Miley so i pulled away. " Sorry, uh i have to call Miley."I said. "Ok. I'll be downstairs" She said. I felt bad that i ruined are moment because of MILEY! Grr.
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