|
|
Used
Aug 25, 2008 13:10:58 GMT -5
Post by Trina on Aug 25, 2008 13:10:58 GMT -5
Jen and Noah??
Yay Joe's back =]
|
|
blatentlyobvious
Full Member
K2 Crew is the essence of awesome. You SHOULD be jealous. ;)
Posts: 153
|
Used
Aug 25, 2008 13:47:50 GMT -5
Post by blatentlyobvious on Aug 25, 2008 13:47:50 GMT -5
Aweee Trina! Yay. You're here.
You should totally set up an account.
|
|
|
|
Used
Aug 25, 2008 14:38:13 GMT -5
Post by Trina on Aug 25, 2008 14:38:13 GMT -5
I'm not entirely sure how to review on here, so I'm sorry if i'm doing something wrong..This is supposed to be a review for chapter 20
Aww, not her grandfather too! I loved the bit with the leaf though, when she was in the hospital room and looking at the tree?..yeah =]
I can't believe the story is finished on here! I'm impatient to finish it now =]
|
|
|
|
Used
Aug 25, 2008 15:19:49 GMT -5
Post by Trina on Aug 25, 2008 15:19:49 GMT -5
21: I loved the emotions in this chapter, even though it was really sad, you wrote it well. The end was...awkward =p But i'm glad they can get past it so easily. I might actually sign up here, because I do need a place for my story.. but it's not really good and I don't want to call attention to it haha =p
I hope the trial goes well.
|
|
|
|
Used
Aug 25, 2008 15:42:35 GMT -5
Post by Trina on Aug 25, 2008 15:42:35 GMT -5
Oh wow, I LOVED the ending!
Just the way you tied up all the loose ends, and the last line, awesome job =D
I hope you write more stories soon =]
|
|
blatentlyobvious
Full Member
K2 Crew is the essence of awesome. You SHOULD be jealous. ;)
Posts: 153
|
Used
Aug 25, 2008 16:50:30 GMT -5
Post by blatentlyobvious on Aug 25, 2008 16:50:30 GMT -5
Oh wow, I LOVED the ending! Just the way you tied up all the loose ends, and the last line, awesome job =D I hope you write more stories soon =] Awee thank you hun. That's sweet. You should post your story. I promise I'll read it. =D |
|
|
|
Used
Aug 27, 2008 0:54:43 GMT -5
Post by princessnikki on Aug 27, 2008 0:54:43 GMT -5
this was an awesome story!!!!! i couldnt stop reading it until i finished. great job!!! i loved it!!!!
|
|
blatentlyobvious
Full Member
K2 Crew is the essence of awesome. You SHOULD be jealous. ;)
Posts: 153
|
Used
Aug 27, 2008 8:26:49 GMT -5
Post by blatentlyobvious on Aug 27, 2008 8:26:49 GMT -5
awe! Thank you! I'm really glad you liked it. I think its the longest I've ever written. =DD
|
|
