Sunshine93
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You are my sunshine, my only *Sunshine*
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Post by Sunshine93 on Oct 2, 2008 17:19:40 GMT -5
already commented on the K2 Crew.. BUT I LOVED IT MORE PPPLLLEEEAAAASSSSE
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Post by kellsterr on Oct 2, 2008 19:09:38 GMT -5
<sigh> i love when you update. it really just makes my day because all your updates are awesome ..... woow i just realized that i use awesome, great, and ahh-mazing to much ... i need some new adjective! alas, have no fear the next time you update i will have better words to describe your story than great, ahh-mazing, or awesome, i promise!!
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Post by bloodtypeespresso on Oct 2, 2008 20:24:52 GMT -5
LOL, thanks Kris! It's coming i promise!
And Kel, it's cool, i'm glad you enjoyed it, and hey i don't mind repetitive...my characters almost always say really, seriously, i mean, and honestly...
lol, yeah, i need to find synonyms too!
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Post by kellsterr on Oct 2, 2008 21:38:33 GMT -5
i found a great synonym that i am going to use from now on.. and i totally got it from thesaurus.com ... i also found some pretty weird ones too, like apparently peachy is a synonym for wonderful ... haha ... what would you say if someone was like your update was peachy? i don't think id be able to stop laughing
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Post by tripletall3 on Oct 7, 2008 19:11:04 GMT -5
Yesssssssss! How cute were they shopping with Jenny? SO CUTE!!! I love how Nick's outfit worked right away and poor Joe was trying so hard! hehehe. MOVIE NIGHT!!! AGGGHHHHH! I can't wait to read about it! ;D
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Post by bloodtypeespresso on Oct 10, 2008 16:00:07 GMT -5
[Chapter 18]
“So, Joe, where am I going now?” Kevin asked as we walked out of the video store; the fifth stop Joe had us make, to keep from making a decision no doubt.
“Gah, fine, home okay, I choose our house, because hanging out in Mr.M’s house when he’s out of town is weird, going to Jen’s suite might get us in trouble with the press, and well mom and dad love Jenny so they won’t mind if she stays the night there you happy!” he ranted waving his arms about causing me to snicker.
“Wow…all you had to do was name a location…” Nick commented raising an eyebrow, and climbing into the Jeep.
“Shut up, you didn’t have to choose.” Joe pouted as we finally made our way over to the Jonas house.
“We’re HERE!” Kevin announced pulling into the driveway of a large two-story house.
“And you called this woods?” I asked with a raise eyebrow making my way out of the car carrying a couple of bags of junk food.
“You haven’t seen the back yard, it might as well be.” Nick interjected.
“Hey buddy, whose side are you on anyway?” I pouted.
“Just tellin’ it like it is, that’s all.” He shrugged and walked inside.
Once we unloaded all the guy’s stuff, the movies, junk food, and Joe’s massive ego…okay so he’s not that bad, the boys ran off to put their stuff away and I started setting up the lounge with blankets and pillows and such. I was right in the middle of my very important task of centering the big fluffy blanket between the television and large overstuffed couch and love seat when all of a sudden out of NOWHERE; I get pelted by a milk dud!
“Hey! What was that for?” I asked the offending party picking up the chocolate and throwing it back, successfully pelting the now pajama clad Joe on the shoulder.
“You’re not wearing the uniform!” He accused pointing at my charcoal skirt and cream-colored top, the plum pumps having been discarded in a corner the second I walked in the door, although I still had my pantyhose on.
“Um, sorry but we didn’t exactly stop over at my place for a change of clothing, and everything you helped me buy today is even more formal than what I’m wearing now.” I pointed out with my right hand on my hip and a raised eyebrow, knowing I had a point.
“Oh, well…okay, I guess…but it’s tradition!” he pouted plopping down on the floor and hugging a pillow as he ate more chocolate looking all of five years old.
“What’s tradition?” Kevin asked walking into the room in his pj’s and glasses, which I must admit make him look adorable.
“Well, movie night’s about to begin, and apparently I’m not properly attired for such an endeavor.” I supplied giving up on the blanket seeing as Joe was now in the way.
“Oh, I can fix that, follow me!” Kevin said excitedly pulling me up the stairs and into what I assumed was his and Joe’s room. After rummaging through a few drawers Kevin finally cam up with a pair of black drawstring pants, with skulls and crossbones all over them, and a black undershirt. “They might be a little big, but at least you’ll be in uniform.” He smirked walking out of the room and letting me change.
So the clothes were obviously too long, but at least the pants weren’t tight around the hips. After adjusting the drawstring and rolling the hem as much as possible, I piled my hair into a messy ponytail and made my way back down the stairs were the guys had already popped in the first Addams Family movie, and were waiting for me too press play. So seeing as Nick was hording the Diet Coke a flopped down next to him and movie night officially began.
“Wait, so are they dead?” Joe asked with a quirked eyebrow as the second movie ended.
“I don’t think so.” I supplied eating a Milk Dud from the box I confiscated some time during the second movie when he started to pelt me again.
“But then why wasn’t Fester electrocuted?” Nick argued confused.
“I don’t know!” What are they all asking me for? I was trying to give them my best impression of Kevin’s older brother look, when I felt it…a cheeto collide with the back of my head. “Oh, no you didn’t!”
“Really? ‘Cause it looks like, I did.” Kevin smirked from his post on the couch.
“Well, you shouldn’t have because Mama Jonas will kill me if I let you boys tear up her house.” I said Milk Dud poised fro attack.
“She’s out of town along with our dad and Frankie; they won’t be back for a few days.” He smirked. Shouldn’t have said that, because the moment he finished his sentence the chocolate left my hand and collided with his nose.
“Oh it’s on!” he yelled grabbing a pillow as a shield while we raced around the room dodging food particles.
Okay so it started out as a thing between Kevin and I, but somehow…and don’t ask me how (though I think it’s because they were caught in the cross fire anyway), it turned into Kevin and I against Joe and Nick…they never stood a chance.
“Duck and cover Jonas, duck and cover!” I yelled rolling across the floor and jumping behind the couch taking a large unopened bag of cheese popcorn with me.
“Right behind you!” Kevin called out lunging over the couch having scored a couple of bags of candy corn.
“Okay, they’ll be out of amo soon, so I say we wait a little until they’ve exhausted most of their stash and then we pelt them from here.” I suggested after peeking over the couch only to find Joe crouching behind his and Nick’s makeshift fort trying to pelt us.
“They’re too far, we won’t even hit them half the time, and popcorn won’t go that far.” He pointed out.
“Okay, then you take the popcorn, I get the candy corn, I distract them, by pelting them repeatedly, while you sneak closer and really get them!” I shouted in a whisper…okay so I whispered excitedly?
“Excellent! They’ll never know what hit them, K2 and XJ-9 to the rescue!” he grinned evilly as the pelting slowly subsided, without giving them much time to reload I sprang up over the couch and started firing the Halloween candy at the two younger Joni successfully hitting my target about eighty percent of the time (that’s really good considering they were moving), giving Kevin ample time to sneak up on them. After a few minuets of this they finally surrendered declaring Kevin and I victorious.
“PONED!!!” we shouted high-five-ing each other, much to Nick and Joe’s disdain.
“Yeah, yeah, yeah, what I want to know is how you managed to hit us every time! I thought you were blind!” Joe accused pouting amidst the pile of food and popping a questionable candy in his mouth.
“I’m farsighted.” I shrugged adjusting my glasses back on the bridge of my nose, as both Nick and Joe gaped at me, while Kevin burst out laughing.
“You’re a sniper!?” Nick asked incredulously, “You’re a movie-night-junk-food-war SNIPER! That’s so not fair!” he pouted climbing on the couch with yet another Diet Coke, and a pillow.
“Hey, FroBro, you were supposed to be on my team, but NO you went with Joe instead, not my fault the Coffee Bond out did the Diet Coke Bond, though ‘twice as sticky only half as strong’!” I pointed out, causing Joe and Nick to roll their eyes at my corniness, while Kevin laughed; I knew I could count on him!
More movie night coming soon!
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Post by kellsterr on Oct 11, 2008 0:02:01 GMT -5
YAYYYYY! movie night was insanely awesome!! can't wait for moreeee!!
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Post by bloodtypeespresso on Oct 21, 2008 12:25:10 GMT -5
[Chapter 19]
Once Nick and Joe started to get drowsy Kevin and I easily overruled them and popped in My Best Friend’s Wedding…okay so I over ruled the other two, while Kevin simply shrugged not caring much either way. Okay that‘s it! If I was skeptical before his movie night apathy just proved Joe‘s point, I hate seeing him like this, it‘s like one minuet he‘s the awesome Kevin, the next he‘s that Kevin times a billion, and then just as quickly he turns into zombie Kev; and I’m pretty sure this is directly related to the sorry excuse for a cell phone (don’t get me wrong it’s cool, but it’s a computer not a phone!) he’s currently browsing through.
About fifteen minuets into the movie found Nick asleep sprawled over the large couch curled up with a blanket and a closed can of Diet Coke, Kevin on the love seat watching the movie with a big fluffy down comforter (cell phone safely on the other side of the couch where he tossed it with a sigh after it vibrated a few seconds ago), and Joe on the floor asleep curled up not only with his blanket but mine as well, leaving me to shiver in my spot next to him. Now looking back and forth between Joe and Kevin I surveyed my options, I could try and pry my blanket from Joe’s iron like grip, or try my luck with the eldest Jonas brother…making a quick decision I grabbed my pillow and made my way over to the love seat.
Standing directly in front of Kevin, giving him what I hoped was my most pathetic look I held out my pillow to him, in a silent truce.
“You’re not going too hog it are you?” he asked with a raised eyebrow, taking the pillow from my hand and placing it between himself and the armrest. I quickly shook my head as he lifted up a corner of the blanket, “Alright then, come on.” He chuckled as I jumped on the spot next to him, and he made sure we were both covered.
Now, I realize that being under this big fluffy blanket with a hot guy in over sized pjs, usually means that I should be warming up…but apparently not….okay well maybe it was the proximity to Kevin, and not the actual coldness that caused me to shiver when his arm brushed mine under the covers.
“Still cold?” Kevin asked concerned draping his arm around me and pulling me closer, causing me to try and stifle the chills running up my spine…seriously girl get a grip, it’s just Kevin! Exactly...it's Kevin, crap i sound like a fan girl!
“Just a little.” I chuckled getting comfortable, and resting my head on his shoulder as he rearranged the blankets so there were no annoying drafts. I guess Kevin really makes a great pillow because the next thing I know I have my eyes closed in one of those not-awake-yet-not-really-sleeping-modes, you know when you’re watching a movie and you can still hear everything that’s going on, but somehow you’re watching a movie in your head that has nothing to do with the original, well nothing except the dialogue that is. Soon enough, I hear the television shut off, then someone placing the remote on the end table, before brushing the hair out of my face and taking off my glasses, and placing them on the table as well.
“Thank you.” I mumbled refusing to open my eyes.
“You’re welcome, now go to sleep.” he said with a hint of laughter.
“But it’s movie night, we haven’t even had our talk yet!” I gasped draping my arm over his torso.
“Okay, well seeing as you have absolutely no intention of moving” I can hear his eyebrow! “how about I just get more comfortable and we talk here?” he chuckled shifting his position a bit so he was now laying on the couch, with me pinned to the back rest…good thing they have huge couches!
“ ‘Kay, but you messed up the blanket.” I informed him as I settled into my previous position, using Kevin as a pillow, causing him to chuckle.
“So, what do you wanna talk about?” he asked after a few seconds.
“Hmm, how about what’s going on with you and your cell phone?” I asked deciding I needed to bite the bullet and not beat around the bush... Partially because it’s the right thing to do, but mostly because the stress of it all will be my ultimate demise! No I’m not dramatic at all, I don’t know what you’re talking about!
Although I might have been a bit to blunt, as he stiffened for a second before answering, “I don’t know what she wants.” he sighed. Now normal people would feel the need to say something here…okay well maybe I just have a big mouth…but I bit back my comment knowing he needed to get this out. “Do you know she calls me more now than when we were actually together? She apologizes, then she accuses me, then she says she…she says she loves me…” he trailed off quietly.
“Oh Kev…” I started, shifting my position so I was looking at him, ready to go into crisis control mode, I mean I can’t let him go back to her! This isn’t even about me any more…I mean this was never about me it was about helping Kevin…by keeping him away from that thing he calls an ex-girlfriend.
“No, I know Jen…I’m not that stupid. But it just hurts more every time she contacts me, it’s like I know she messed up, I know I wasn’t really happy, but she said she loved me…I thought that meant something.” he finished letting a tear roll down the side of his face.
Slowly lifting my self from my previous position I wiped the tear off his face then kissed his check. “Someday…when it’s the right girl babe, it will.” I whispered in his ear before looking him in the eye…well, as well as I could in the dark, at this close proximity, without my glasses. “but until then, remember I’m here if you need anything.” Once I got a weak nod of acknowledgment I slid back down to my position with my head on his chest draping my right arm over his torso.
A few seconds later I felt both his arms wrap around me and his grip tighten, before he kissed the top of my head. “How could I forget?”
Kevin’s POV
I woke up the next morning to find everyone else still asleep, thinking I should start the coffee I tired to slip off the couch when I heard Jenny protest. “No…my pillow.” she mumbled burying her face further into my shirt. Trying not to chuckle…or wake her up, I settled back into my previous position, examining the tiny woman currently holding me captive. During the course of the night she somehow managed to lose one sock, her hair tie, and probably all oxygen flow to her brain as her head is completely covered by the blanket only a few stray strands of curly hair peaking out.
I know this should be funny, really if you could see this you’d agree, but somehow it’s not. Instead all I can think about is how small she looks next to me, or how her clutching my shirt like this with her head in my chest just makes me want to protect her…protect her from what? Well I’m not entirely sure, but anything that comes her way I want to be there to hold her through it…which brings me to my last slightly more disturbing thought…how easily…no, how naturally she fits in my arms. Now call me crazy, but I’m pretty sure that’s not the kind of thing best friends think about. Sure she’s attractive, she’s always been attractive that’s not the point…the point is last night. Last night was…well last night was actually the most fun I’ve had in really long time, but the talk I had with Jenny afterwards while helpful didn’t really solve the problem I’m having now…well a problem I’ve been having for a while, and that is that Jenny might actually be the reason Brittany and I broke up.
Not directly of course, we never crossed any lines, but Brittany never liked her, and if I’m being honest with myself, which trust me isn’t always easy, I think I started to compare Brittany to Jen, and she always fell short…because truth be told, if I’d been unattached when I met her, I would have asked Jenny out on the spot…and that’s what scares me.
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Post by kellsterr on Oct 21, 2008 15:29:05 GMT -5
--- i believe that was my face after i finished reading Kevins point of view, but it had a little bit more of a smile to it so maybe like these two smileys put together . GODD i love this story sooo much!! it should never end ... you should just keep writing it until your like 90 and then maybe you could stop writing it. yeah i think you should do that ... hahhaaha
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Post by bloodtypeespresso on Oct 21, 2008 15:50:07 GMT -5
--- i believe that was my face after i finished reading Kevins point of view, but it had a little bit more of a smile to it so maybe like these two smileys put together . GODD i love this story sooo much!! it should never end ... you should just keep writing it until your like 90 and then maybe you could stop writing it. yeah i think you should do that ... hahhaaha LOL, i love the smiley conjunction! I think as long as i have an internal monologue going I can keep this fic up. But I’m thinking that eventually, some time from now when it gets to a good stopping point I’ll just start a new one, where we can have them (I’ll change her job and look a bit maybe ) meet and fall for each other all over again!
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