lemons ;; <3
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Post by lemons ;; <3 on Aug 2, 2008 22:55:57 GMT -5
For ages, I have wanted to write a Jonas Brother fanfic
but I have no ideas.
You can post here any ideas you want
and I'll give them a go.
Thanks.
♥
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Post by Anna on Aug 3, 2008 17:00:51 GMT -5
hmm. i might be able to help you come up with something. but first, would you rather it be about all the boys, or one specifically? and do you want it to be current, or like somewhere between 05-17ish when they werent so big, or in the future, or a combo? and lastly, what genre? the obvious idea would be your average fanfic girl meets the guys at A-a meet and greet B-some other random way or C-has been friends since the diaper days girl falls in love with a brother or vice versa drama. either theres another guy/girl involved, hectic schedules get in the way, there are rumors and paparazzi, etc it all ends happily ever after or in some disastrous way if you want a little unexpected twist  |
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Post by blatentlyobvious on Aug 3, 2008 18:56:25 GMT -5
hahha anna, I think you pretty much have that down to a science.
nice work.
Lemons, whatever you do, everyone here is going to appreciate it
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Post by lemons ;; <3 on Aug 4, 2008 5:05:59 GMT -5
Here is something I wrote for an example [warning;; very bad];;
We have visited New York seven times for concerts and every time I see her.
When we first started coming to New York, she would be just like all our other fans; screaming, saying she loves us, always smiling. She came to every signing we did and every time we had a concert, she would get front row seat slightly to the left of the stage so she could be near me when I played a piano.
But things have changed.
A few months ago, I did an autograph signing in New York and I was waiting to see her and her banana blonde hair. But, when she came, there was no banana blonde hair. When I asked her about what happened, she told me she had developed cancer. She told me that she didn't want the treatment and that she wanted to keep her blonde hair to look pretty for me. She then told me that my speech about having diabetes showed her that she needed the treatment and it wouldn't change her life one bit. I have remembered her ever since.
My fingers hit the piano keys as we start "When You Look Me In The Eyes" at our eight concert in New York. I glance around the crowd and there she is in her rightful spot in the front row. But, instead of her banana blonde hair, she is showing off her bald head. She is looking at me, giving me a sweet smile while the girls around her scream. I start to sing, "When you look me in the eyes, and tell me that you love, every thing's all right because your right here by my side." She still isn't screaming even though I sung those lyrics while looking her directly in the eyes.
She is more beautiful now.
GAHH! My examples horrible! ><
I'll start of that fanfic now and I'll use the girl from my example because I love her. 
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Post by lemons ;; <3 on Aug 5, 2008 7:11:58 GMT -5
Oh, btw, Anna... your icon is <3!
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Post by blatentlyobvious on Aug 27, 2008 20:00:12 GMT -5
That's good lemons. Roll with that! I'd love to see where you take it.
It sounds really honest, you know?
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Post by bloodtypeespresso on Sept 5, 2008 4:47:02 GMT -5
the concept is pretty go, doesn't really ring cliche Jonas, yet has all the makings of a good chick flick! |
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